Welcome to Wonderland [Discussion]

Tell me what you think-- so far it's normal, but what happens down the rabbit hole?..

I lurv it so far. I want to read more, a very good story.

It caught my attention when I started reading the first couple of paragraphs. The way it's written just wants the viewer to really continue.. At least in my opinion. The characters seem well-portrayed. The character based on me is a little to perky, but I really wouldn't want to be a downer and is much happier being perky. All-in-all I'll continue to read it. =) Have fun brain storming and typing.

MUST READ MOAR, I wuvs it........ MOAR moar moar! Anyway good job! 8D

The second-part was very fantasy-like. Made it seem colorful and fun. And Im late for a date! OH NO But i've never!!!

Well, I had no doubt I'd have something to do with the Cheshire Cat the second I saw the title...

But that's besides the point. Amazing Job K, It definitely makes me want to read the entire thing. *2 thumbs... er... paws up*

Thanks for all the feedback, guys! I wrote a new chapter, woo.

Ohhhh, I like it K. *kekekekeke* I love the part where I push Kenji :3

Mischievousness, FTW!