Painful Memories:Discussion

Because my chapters are so long and take up a lot of space. I’ll make this Discussion topic for comments ideas and rants.

Keep it nice and all forums rules apply.


Always welcome to ideas~

Bibbers, it's fantastic, really loving the story...even though I'm all kidnapped and whatnot Seriously though, I'm waiting the new chapters like I was for W's story so long ago

Masterfully written, well put together, and soooo much better than my story, (which I will post the first chapter for in a few minutes.) I really like the way the characters were written, although, I found myself asking, "Haseo?" Sorry, I'm a little far behind on older player's names. -Sheepish grin- But Aizawa, haha, my RP last name xD

Bemcint wrote:Masterfully written, well put together, and soooo much better than my story, (which I will post the first chapter for in a few minutes.) I really like the way the characters were written, although, I found myself asking, "Haseo?" Sorry, I'm a little far behind on older player's names. -Sheepish grin- But Aizawa, haha, my RP last name xD

Haseo = Lelouch's old RP name.

Kira wrote:

Bemcint wrote:Masterfully written, well put together, and soooo much better than my story, (which I will post the first chapter for in a few minutes.) I really like the way the characters were written, although, I found myself asking, "Haseo?" Sorry, I'm a little far behind on older player's names. -Sheepish grin- But Aizawa, haha, my RP last name xD

Haseo = Lelouch's old RP name.

I thank you very much xD Anyways, once again, Aki, I look forward to the next chapters.

... Some hardcore shiezness, keep up the good work!!

I'm in need of a few ideas about anything!Just looking for ways to make it better for you guys D: A little help someone?

Progress slowly into the relationship between Roxie and Aki, if Roxie is going to be a major role. Have a few more characters thrown in, because really, Aki's going to need all the help she can get, ne? And sometime soon, you should bring in Haseo's big brother, to really streamline the story. I'm sure that with more people introduced, you'll have more ideas for the story, ne?

Kotaro Aizawa wrote:Progress slowly into the relationship between Roxie and Aki, if Roxie is going to be a major role. Have a few more characters thrown in, because really, Aki's going to need all the help she can get, ne? And sometime soon, you should bring in Haseo's big brother, to really streamline the story. I'm sure that with more people introduced, you'll have more ideas for the story, ne?

Pretty much agree. =D

Eijin-Suzaku wrote:

Kotaro Aizawa wrote:Progress slowly into the relationship between Roxie and Aki, if Roxie is going to be a major role. Have a few more characters thrown in, because really, Aki's going to need all the help she can get, ne? And sometime soon, you should bring in Haseo's big brother, to really streamline the story. I'm sure that with more people introduced, you'll have more ideas for the story, ne?

Pretty much agree. =D

apperntly you didn't read the latest chapter then c_c