M is for Murder (Discussion)

Talk about what you thought of the story and rate it on a scale from 1-10, with 10 being the highest. Also please mention what was your favorite part of the story.

8/10 for the content and flow. The only problem I see is that it was a bit forced, like everything happened due to some powerful force :/ I liked the beginning, and the descriptions of the character, but maybe when you tell a story in first person you should say the relationship between your character and the one being described, like how you know what the person is and how long, etc etc.

Please look at this topic. You are not allowed to have a discussion thread if your story is under 1750 words. Your story is 1462 words. Please abide by the rules or next time it is an infraction. Thank you.