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Eiji's Story number 1:I run, I jump, I fight, I fly, I fall... For you.((Comments and Discussion.))

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Post by Eijin-Suzaku Mon May 04, 2009 6:30 pm

Comments and chit-chat.... Eheh... YEAH! Uhm... Enjoy?
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Post by Kenji Saioji Mon May 04, 2009 8:52 pm

Great story Eiji. It's like...Amazing. I must read more! MUST. So write more =D
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Post by Omnis Tue May 05, 2009 3:30 pm

W00T! I'm a knight... -victory dance- (>^_^)> ^(^_^)^ <(^_^<)
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Post by Eijin-Suzaku Tue May 05, 2009 9:58 pm

Thanks for the comments and .. stuff makes want to write more. =D
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Post by Kenji Saioji Tue May 05, 2009 10:40 pm

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I must read more! Great story Eiji!
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Post by Omnis Wed May 06, 2009 11:53 am

This has got to be tied for my #1 favorite story ^_^ (Eiji's and K's ^3^)
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Post by Kotaro Aizawa Wed May 06, 2009 7:55 pm

My.....ability.....PWNS!!!!! Dude, loved it, make more. I totally pwnt Fate, he just got in a lucky shot. xD
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Post by Omnis Wed May 06, 2009 8:43 pm

OH COME ON!!
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Post by Eijin-Suzaku Wed May 06, 2009 8:46 pm

Omnis wrote:OH COME ON!!

Don't worry Omnis you aren't dead, this is just the beginning still. Cheer up pal!
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Post by Omnis Wed May 06, 2009 8:51 pm

Eijin-Suzaku wrote:
Omnis wrote:OH COME ON!!

Don't worry Omnis you aren't dead, this is just the beginning still. Cheer up pal!

I know, I'm just pissed that I lost... at least it had drama
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Post by Chib Fri May 08, 2009 12:04 pm

Dag, yo. Momo sees her mother getting beheaded? No wonder she turned out so odd.
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Post by Eijin-Suzaku Fri May 08, 2009 4:05 pm

Chib wrote:Dag, yo. Momo sees her mother getting beheaded? No wonder she turned out so odd.

Yeah, pretty harsh. But I have a question how many of you guys actually use the songs I provide for the story?
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Post by Omnis Fri May 08, 2009 4:20 pm

Eijin-Suzaku wrote:
Chib wrote:Dag, yo. Momo sees her mother getting beheaded? No wonder she turned out so odd.

Yeah, pretty harsh. But I have a question how many of you guys actually use the songs I provide for the story?

I do, I can properly visualize the scenarios and sync it up with the music, making it feel like a real anime for some reason (at least that's how I picture it...) ._.
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Post by Admin Old Fri May 08, 2009 6:42 pm

Eijin-Suzaku wrote:
Chib wrote:Dag, yo. Momo sees her mother getting beheaded? No wonder she turned out so odd.

Yeah, pretty harsh. But I have a question how many of you guys actually use the songs I provide for the story?
Honestly, I don't. (No offense) but I often don't like the songs you pick out, and it's annoying to have to click a link and click off the other for each scene. Plus, I read a hell of a lot faster than the music plays... so...

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Post by Eijin-Suzaku Fri May 08, 2009 7:25 pm

Kira wrote:
Eijin-Suzaku wrote:
Chib wrote:Dag, yo. Momo sees her mother getting beheaded? No wonder she turned out so odd.

Yeah, pretty harsh. But I have a question how many of you guys actually use the songs I provide for the story?
Honestly, I don't. (No offense) but I often don't like the songs you pick out, and it's annoying to have to click a link and click off the other for each scene. Plus, I read a hell of a lot faster than the music plays... so...


It's completely your choice wether you want to listen to it or not, I just encourage to do so. But you don't have to if you don't want to. =)
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Post by Admin Old Fri May 08, 2009 9:29 pm

Eijin-Suzaku wrote:
Kira wrote:
Eijin-Suzaku wrote:
Chib wrote:Dag, yo. Momo sees her mother getting beheaded? No wonder she turned out so odd.

Yeah, pretty harsh. But I have a question how many of you guys actually use the songs I provide for the story?
Honestly, I don't. (No offense) but I often don't like the songs you pick out, and it's annoying to have to click a link and click off the other for each scene. Plus, I read a hell of a lot faster than the music plays... so...


It's completely your choice wether you want to listen to it or not, I just encourage to do so. But you don't have to if you don't want to. =)

I know. I listened to it at some point, but like I said..
1. I don't like the songs you pick a lot.. either just don't like / doesn't go with the scene (in my opinion)
2. It's annoying because I read quickly to have to click a link and exit the old one all the time y`know? xD

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Post by Chib Sat May 09, 2009 11:50 am

I don't, but I read hella fast. And I'm usually listening to music in the first place.
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Post by Omnis Sat May 09, 2009 4:54 pm

I like the new chapter... but it's just a fight and a flash back ._. Still, I like it and can't wait for the next chapter
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Post by Omnis Tue May 26, 2009 7:35 am

hmmm... this chapter was... Interesting?... ._.
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Post by Admin Old Tue May 26, 2009 8:53 am

Eh.. no offense, but I didn't really like it.. wow, I seem like a bitch being the only one complaining. It's because I'm a grammar Nazi, probably. Also, that some parts of it seem so...
**Kenji's adventure as to why he had a flawless and perfect face.** After Kenji jumped out the window he quickly ran all the way to the airport, got on a plane, went to america, looked for the best surgeon. Once he got there he found the best doctor in the world and asked him to make his face perfect in the next 1 second. "Alright, but this will cost you.. 5 million dollars and in the next year or so you'll have to cut off your *****and give it to me so I can experiment." Incase you were wondering the ***** does not stand for what you think it does and stands for noses. Kenji agreed and the next half a second his face was completed he then flew all the way back to japan.
Yeah. That.

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Post by Omnis Tue May 26, 2009 4:06 pm

It was just pure randomness =_= Funny, but random...
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Post by Kenji Saioji Tue May 26, 2009 4:34 pm

I want more chapters. It's getting good. And plus, my story is full of randomness as well. Randomness is good and bad at times of story writing.
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Post by Omnis Sat May 30, 2009 1:46 pm

Aww Eiji, poor you... *pictures himself accidentaly cleaving Eiji in two*
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Post by Eijin-Suzaku Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:36 pm

Chapter 14 will probably be posted at the end of this week. Second season of the first chapter will be posted a month after.
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