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Eiji's Story Number 2: Breath, Live, Adrenaline ((Discussion))

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Post by Eijin-Suzaku Sat Jul 11, 2009 3:09 pm

Hoped you all enjoy my new storeeeyyyyyy =D
This is a place where you can discuss concerns or how you like or hate it.
I'll be updating how many chapters have been completed

CHAPTER 0 Complete
CHAPTER 1 Complete
CHAPTER 2 Complete
CHAPTER 3 WorkinProgress
CHAPTER 4 Incomplete
CHAPTER FINAL Incomplete


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Post by Giovanni Sat Jul 11, 2009 7:07 pm

I like those drawings. If I drew stuff for a story I wrote then it would most likely be stick men.
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Post by Eijin-Suzaku Sat Jul 11, 2009 10:33 pm

Sorrow wrote:I like those drawings. If I drew stuff for a story I wrote then it would most likely be stick men.

Lulz My drawing suckkk so iz alright
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Post by Admin Old Mon Jul 13, 2009 8:29 pm

Not bad just 2 questions...
1. Why do you translate the names to Katakana? o.O;
2. So what is he an assassin or something? And why do they have codenames, will you explain later?

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Post by Omnis Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:35 pm

I like the story... but it seems so... ._. different... Still want to read more...
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Post by Eijin-Suzaku Sun Jul 19, 2009 4:22 am

Kira wrote:Not bad just 2 questions...
1. Why do you translate the names to Katakana? o.O;
2. So what is he an assassin or something? And why do they have codenames, will you explain later?

It's a shorter story, but i'll try my best to explain. I translated the names to katakana just to make it have a cooler feeling a I guess? The codenames are names given from the organization in which everyone in their files have one.
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Post by Eijin-Suzaku Sun Jul 19, 2009 4:23 am

Omnis wrote:I like the story... but it seems so... ._. different... Still want to read more...

Thanks we'll continue then. =)
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